The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

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The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 5:41 pm

I am glad that so many of you are enjoying this story. I know that several of you are "chomping at the bit" for more family involvement and for Victoria to be free. Let's face it though, I can't have...

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 6:00 pm

I'm glad you told how the family is faring without Vic.

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 6:03 pm

I can't stand the tension and sorrow of the family not knowing what has happened to Victoria.Hurry back BVM !!!Laura

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 6:35 pm

I love how you have told us the ways in which Victoria's children are coping with her prolonged absence. It is wonderful to see them keeping faith with their mother, just as she is keeping faith with...

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 7:18 pm

I love how this family is sticking together in their time of need. I'm glad Audra was stubborn enough to get the men to see the need for tradition in this case, so they can carry on, and stand tough.

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 7:20 pm

Such a poignant scene- I especially liked Nick's gifts, and I'm sure Victoria will be thrilled with ALL their gifts when she finally comes home- as I'm sure she will!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 7:22 pm

Such a poignant scene- I especially liked Nick's gifts, and I'm sure Victoria will be thrilled with ALL their gifts when she finally comes home- as I'm sure she will!!!!!!!!!!!! Meanwhile, what's...

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 8:48 pm

So true to their characters- you got them all down pat... we see glimpses of some of the personalities we love so dearAudra- faithful and insightfulNick- tender, a little stubborn but always all about...

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 9:13 pm

I think you captured the real Nick beautifully in this chapter.Debbie

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 13, 2008, 11:57 pm

How sad for all of them!Barbara

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 14, 2008, 2:41 am

Good to have a glimpse at how the family has been faring in Victoria's absence. Such an incredibly painful situation for each of them.

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 14, 2008, 3:57 am

Oh my goodness! This was an excellent way to bring us up to date on the family, and a wonderful way for Nick and the rest of the family to express their continued hope. Well done!

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 15, 2008, 5:15 am

Glad to read about how the family is dealing with Victoria's disapearance but so very sad as well. I do like the fact they are keeping her Christmas presents for her and especially like that Nick is...

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 15, 2008, 6:45 am

I am glad that Audra held her ground and helped those 'clumsy men' deal with Victoria's absence by holding on to tradition. I'm stocking up on kleenex for future chapters but am hoping for a happy...

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Re: The Long Road Home-Chapter 6

March 15, 2008, 11:11 am

A very moving and poignant chapter, your description of the feelings and thoughts of the family members was very well done. I do hope there is some relief for them soon? Great story! Maisie.

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